Rebz :)

Thanks I'll work on it, because it isn't supposed to be light-hearted, you're right.

So I’ll feed you meth Seriously?? That really needs re-wording! That's all. The only word I can use is this: Deep. It's fabulous!

The pain, it doesn't hurt much. I have it 'round the clock. Since you've gone. Tick, tick, tick, tick tock. Inside, it has broken. One piece, now two. Gone, faded ...

Firstly, I loved it! It was one of those stories that just keep you reading and reading... Anyway, the only part that wasn't 100% was the flashbacks. I do know ...

World War IV breaks out then. (World War III was when I was told that we had to leave our nice house and move to this dump) “NO!!!” I scream. ...

Ok, firstly I liked it, but it is nowhere near flawless. I know a good romance when I see one, and this could really go places. The whole first part ...

This was pretty good. I loved the describing of James (sounds like a real dream-boat)I love what you said about his eyes. "I love you" This made absoulutly no sense. ...

great tradition! *signs name roughly a million times* that oughta do it! *claps* whoo! And, to be frank, I LOVE YWS! I have only been here since November '09 but ...

Thanks heaps, I'm glad both of you like it and feel connected with Aisling. I will make it play-doh again and fix it. PS Aisling isn't just playing up because ...

I don't understand this very well - I can't pick up the romance and no offence, it sounds like a weird version of a childs bedtime story. It was moving ...

I liked it. The twist at the end was good, and the ryhming was okay. It was pretty good, seeing as you just randomly put it together, but the title ...

Some swearing in it. This is the beginning of a narrative I've started. It's based around Scarlett by Cathy Cassidy and the movie Wild Child, but I've made it into ...

I would like to join please. This is my character: NAME: Rozalee Hempshire (or Rose) AGE: 14 (Year 9) STRENGTHS/WEAKNESSES: Her strengths are inflicting pain with her mind (feels like ...

OK, here is my actual reveiw (Much better than the last one). Firstly, I was great, it has potential, like something in a book or movie, a lot can be ...

All righty, but excuse me for a sec... A FEW HUNDRED!? OK, much better. before I get more reveiws to make it longer, i want to lay down some facts: ...